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"I want to be a writer.",
The seventh grade girl said.
I can be a writer cause I have lots of ideas in my head.
I have a life of experiances most will never see.
I could be a writter because I met the S.W.A.T team when I was seven.
I want to be a writter because he taught me to speak.
I will be a writer like no other seen.
Because I am the writer M.E. me